ext_245647 ([identity profile] kar-chan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] leskuh 2010-05-25 09:44 pm (UTC)

I like that you wrote Britta and Slater together. I figured that fandom would be stuck on shipping after the final, but it's good to see that people are still interested in the characters outside of their ships. I really like Slater for about the same reason I like Jeff (besides that he's played by Joel McHale) and you did a good job with her character. A+

Britta crying was a bit of a strange thing to do in front of Slater, but not too unexpected. She did just humiliate herself in public and she cares a great deal about how she's percieved. I thought that Troy's "Jeff's a dumbass" was a little out of place. I can't see him focusing on anybody but himself in that moment and it just didn't sound like him.

Overall I enjoyed it.

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