I'm so picky with HA! characterizations. It's why I don't write very much HA! fic. I get so worked up about having it all PERFECT.

I love Gerald even when he's being a dick. I think he's just the kind of person that would be honest about something like this. I mean, Helga IS being a selfish asshole in this story and it's affecting Phoebe a lot.

I know what you mean. I'm not sure about these two...I mean I can see why they'd grow apart, but I like to think that they'll always have each other's backs. I feel bad for Phoebe though. She gives more than she gets more often than not.

Haha. Glad you caught that. I like adding in some of the show's little quirks.