It was so... absolutely... Argggh! Lack of words again.

Honestly, you don't have to write anything anymore — what you did already is a miracle.

Now I can see that the story has many lines... And now I actually believe that you know what's going on, and it is not just an "empty suspense".

But the urban legends part was absolutely outstanding. It reminds me the comics "Gerald's Urban Legends" (here (http://www.nick.com/shows/nick_mag/nicktoon_comics/index.jhtml)). Have you seen it?